This day is an error
I woke up before six a.m.
Cooked rice and swept floors
While singing Sugarcult’s Memory.
Before I wake at 7, but not today. Not today.
When was the first time I cooked rice and swept floors?
I can’t remember. I can’t tell.
Classes will bell at 10. Have I studied?
Or at least read readings?
No? Not yet? Why? Is the dream of Suma
Used up? Or perhaps it will only remain as it was? A dream.
Oh I remembered. I dreamt kissing
Kierra Knightly on the lips. How I miss my ex
Who now spends royalty on top of the Sears.
Is there anything else to be done?
The laundry is heightening like the Everest.
How I wish someone would come and wash all these.
I’m tired of working and studying, eating and sleeping.
Is there anything else to be done?
It’s almost 9. Something’s burning. Shit the rice!
I won’t read the stories. Guess I’ll skip class.
Set the laundry for tomorrow.
It’s the same excuse like yesterday.

*”but not toda.. but not today.” this line reminds me of a song…
(…lindsay lohan fan?…)
* heightening like the Everest”.. nice try of exagerating things. but not too nice in creating concrete significant detai;s..because of this detail, the lieral level of the poem was not really taken into cosideration at the frist place…
ok, actually, ang details pero dili jd xa ana ka distinct for us readers to drool over it..i mean it’s not as “rememberable” as wat judy jones said over dexter.
nwe, can u have another title for this? it sounds corny man gd..oa kau (at least para sa aq) ang laundry heightening like the everest..murag transliterated xa sa “gabundok na labahin..” (tama ba?) na-dstract q dha..
another thing…
“I won’t read the stories. Guess I’ll skip class.
Set the laundry for tomorrow.
It’s the same excuse like yesterday”
ganahan q dre nga line..gmay nga chnages/revision lang cguro…
“but not today. not today..”
hillary duff nga line na sa So Yesterday yta nya nga song..
hmm…
suggestion lang..
wat if mgpaste kag mga lines/lyrics of songs as ur poem..planu pd nako na buhaton pero wa pa qy klaro unsa jd..
like…
“i woke up blahblah…
blahblahblahblahblah..”
dats ol..for now..