define me

i wrote this for my class. it should define what is poetry. i got this lines from my closet and wove them. see if the lines sound good. feel free to give comments and murderous criticisms. tankzz ^_^

A second before the rot.
The image of a memory,
still, unmoved. The vision
of a white heaven and
the screams of hell. A time
before passing. A pause
before death. The walk
through the mist towards
eternity, before the
beginning of an endless
and silent whisper.

~ by fyxe on March 6, 2007.